Chapter 2: Amoz, the "Critical?
- What do you think?
"It's good, but lack polish some things. Look I'm going to write some tips that should help you enough, "said a girl with dark hair and eyes.
"Thank you, I never thought I would find a reader in the forest.
"In the woods there's everything Amoz-d
TMLXC pulled the notebook where he wrote his fiction, wrote slow as a turtle, but moved that was his motto for all, it might be because it was a bit vague ... Nah, better write something.
had no past or fifteen minutes when a shadow out of the woods with great speed and grabbed the notebook.
- Hey! Give me that, "he shouted at the creature, like a human but it was more pequeñoy more ... hair? CHT
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plagiarist
Patrol
& nbsPersephone on government.
Ya, I needed a voice that will fuck with mysteries that he knew that he was nosy by nature, ahem, I mean funny, it was naturally curious I went to the file of the kingdom to find out everything, but board was dying ear, so I leave it for another day ...