Ya ya, the second chapter of this thing.
Chapter 2: Amoz, the "Critical?
- What do you think?
"It's good, but lack polish some things. Look I'm going to write some tips that should help you enough, "said a girl with dark hair and eyes.
"Thank you, I never thought I would find a reader in the forest.
"In the woods there's everything Amoz-d
TMLXC pulled the notebook where he wrote his fiction, wrote slow as a turtle, but moved that was his motto for all, it might be because it was a bit vague ... Nah, better write something.
had no past or fifteen minutes when a shadow out of the woods with great speed and grabbed the notebook.
- Hey! Give me that, "he shouted at the creature, like a human but it was more pequeñoy more ... hair? CHT
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plagiarist "This was what he said, pointing to the creature that was caught with his left hand.
- What will you do with it?
"I take to PLAP.
- PLAP? "I do not know why, would a zoo?
Patrol -release anti-plagiarism &; Ndash; said before disappearing.
Well, he had his fic and could go no worries at LMF.
The trip was tiring but it was there, huge oak doors were open and people never stopped coming and going, like a busy place. Passed through the gates and saw what appeared to be a market where people buy from food to vendíay very rare objects.
A huge poster showing all the addresses of the kingdom, or at least most, apparently en & amusta this ability and are always hidden.
"Thanks, anything else?
"No sir, the rest will discover over time," she said in farewell.
was devoted to wander a bit around the room, no money, or well almost nothing but a pair of bronze coins that would serve him for ... a soda, I had to do something or die.
"Welcome," he cheerfully greeted a girl nomore than fourteen years.
"Hey, thanks, you know where I can find a place to stay?
"Sure, there are many houses for rent and sale, but since you're new and do not seem to have a lot of money can go to an inn that is a few blocks from here.
He thanked the Senora was headed for the exit, but stopped abruptly to avoid colliding with a woman wearing fine clothes and had a crown on his head .
"Hey, have you seen Mac? She asked.
-Ehh ... - Who the fuck was Mac and who was this?
"Your Imperial Majesty, this young man is new and I think that Mac came to get lost in the woods, a female voice spoke behind him.
He turned and saw a woman wearing a full black robe that matched her hair, otherwise face was not very friendly.
& nbsPersephone on government.
Ya, I needed a voice that will fuck with mysteries that he knew that he was nosy by nature, ahem, I mean funny, it was naturally curious I went to the file of the kingdom to find out everything, but board was dying ear, so I leave it for another day ...
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